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sneakin in another goth shot
click image ^ more contrast than the previous set... but I quite like it. I should have lightened the signature that almost vanished upon flattening the image. 
Dimensions: 800 x 1000 pixels DateTime Original: 2006:01:29 22:06:00 Exif Offset: 216 Exposure Bias: 2 EV Exposure Program: Manual Exposure Time: 1/500 sec FNumber: f 18 Flash: Flash, Auto-Mode, Return light not detected Focal length: 27 mm ISO: 200 Max Aperture: f 3.7 Metering Mode: Spot Model: NIKON D70 Mark Greenmantle
http://www.elffinarts.com / mark at elffinarts dot com D70, 50mm/F1.8, kit lens, 80-200mm/F2.8, 35-70mm/f2.8, two 160w/sec slave strobes, sb600, "taller than me" astronomical tripod "can I have that step ladder please"
Nice shot, I'd have been tempted to have two varied head positions.. for me the mirroring of the same angle is a little of putting. Just a query are these two models married, or related ?
I feel this one lacks because the sides are hugging the hands right where black should be... just a little bit.
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they are engaged I think. the pose does have a funny feel about it doesnt it. the crop was unfortunate but due to them falling this way when I was expecting a different pose, so the hands were at the extremities of the shot. thanks, critique much appreciated!  Mark Greenmantle
http://www.elffinarts.com / mark at elffinarts dot com D70, 50mm/F1.8, kit lens, 80-200mm/F2.8, 35-70mm/f2.8, two 160w/sec slave strobes, sb600, "taller than me" astronomical tripod "can I have that step ladder please"
Mark nice shot, but i think there i smor magic with the girl than the guy, also how do you feel about the guys arm slightly bent, it gives the image that little quirk but it may be cleaner to have had his arm straight, i can't really vision it just seemed to be concentrating more on that bent arm than anything else
the alignment of the heads is sweet. Tone and art direction suits the goth look but you have pulled it off exceptionally also how do you think a square crop of the image would look
Wendell, I'm thinking a square crop would have improved this... thanks for the idea.
Mark Greenmantle
http://www.elffinarts.com / mark at elffinarts dot com D70, 50mm/F1.8, kit lens, 80-200mm/F2.8, 35-70mm/f2.8, two 160w/sec slave strobes, sb600, "taller than me" astronomical tripod "can I have that step ladder please"
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