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Postby Hybrid on Wed Jan 18, 2006 11:54 pm

Hello all,

This is my first image post (so please limit your heckling :P)

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Some details: This was taken in my backyard recently with my D70 and a borrowed 70-200VR. This is just one of the reasons why I fell in love with that lens and why I really want one now (problem is just getting hold of one for a half decent price...)

Anyway, comments much appreciated... :)

Stephen
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Postby blacknstormy on Wed Jan 18, 2006 11:56 pm

I love this shot Stephen - I've been through your photo log a couple of times, and you have some truely stunning images !!!!!

I can say only one thing - post more and post often :)

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Postby Hybrid on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:07 am

wow, thanks Rel for the compliment and encouragement :)

I recently (finally!) got broadband at home so I hope to be doing a lot more posting and commenting from now on...

Cheers,

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Postby xorl on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:57 am

Very nice image Stephen, it really works for me. Well processed.
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Postby blinkblink on Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:30 am

That is a really great shot.

Looks like a hill billy roo. :)
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:50 am

Stephen if you post in this section you are asking for a crtique and that is what you get like it or not, I should know :wink:

This iamge is IMHO very good. Nifce and sharp and the roo has a lovely expression. The pieces of grass in it's mouth are a very nice touch. :D
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:53 am

Wonderful photo of our national symbol. Terrific use of DOF to make the viewer concentrate on the subject. Well done. :)
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Postby Killakoala on Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:56 am

In your backyard? That's a funny looking dog. :) :) :)

Great image. Shows that with a great tool (Camera+70-200) in your hands, you can take great images. This is no exception.
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Postby Wocka on Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:37 am

Stephen,

Fantastic shot. I just looked through your gallary and there all great.
Keep up the good work.

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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jan 19, 2006 9:00 am

Stephen

An excellent pic, first post or not. So why is it excellent. Well you've got a highly photographed animal doing something different - always a bonus. It's wonderfully sharp and in focus and you have the beautiful creamy bokeh that the 70-200 is renowned for. To round things off it's got great colour and is well cropped. Congratulations. Now that wasn't too hard was it. :wink:
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Postby Potatis on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:18 pm

Stephen, very nice! :) It has all the quality stubbsy mentioned, it's a very nice clear image. Please post more often. :)
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:23 pm

Stephen - what a fine image!
The thing I like most about this image is that the 2nd (OOF) Kangaroo is amost mirorring exactly the chewing position with the main roo in the shot. Gold! :)
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Postby wile_E on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:31 pm

Hi Stephen, beautiful image! I love that you've managed to capture the second Kangaroo in (what looks like) the exact position as your main subject.

Look forward to seeing more from you :D :D
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Postby radar on Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:39 pm

Geoff wrote:The thing I like most about this image is that the 2nd (OOF) Kangaroo is amost mirorring exactly the chewing position with the main roo in the shot. :)


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Postby moggy on Thu Jan 19, 2006 1:48 pm

Great shot Stephen, nice and sharp and 'unusual' pose. :wink:

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Postby Sheila Smart on Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:57 pm

Absolutely superb image and great bokeh. Suggest you place it on a stock library!

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Postby avkomp on Thu Jan 19, 2006 4:33 pm

great image for a first post.

you have done well to get a different outlook on a much photographed subject

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Postby Finch on Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:13 pm

Stephen,

Delightful shot of a roo - well composed, sharp and good behaviour. A great wildlife shot indeed. Keep up the good work.

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Postby jethro on Thu Jan 19, 2006 7:40 pm

Stephen,
This is a nicely composed image. great colour and sharpness. Well shot
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Postby Alex on Thu Jan 19, 2006 9:55 pm

Stephen, this is an excellent image. Well caught!
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Postby Mal on Thu Jan 19, 2006 10:06 pm

Wonderful image. I just went and had a look at your website, and am now listening to "The Cat Empire" Post some of those pictures awesome stuff, well done.
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Postby nito on Thu Jan 19, 2006 10:15 pm

Let me start with some heckling.

Why did you have to take a nice well composed shot of a kangaroo. Go home, grab your camera and produce more shots like these to share in the forums. Do amaze us with your camera wizardry again! WHY, WHY WHY!!! :wink:
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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Jan 19, 2006 10:48 pm

Oh No - Nito has had a meltdown :( ;)
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Postby Hybrid on Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:48 am

Thanks everyone!!! I'm quite taken aback by all the nice comments and words of encouragement :) Very much appreciated! I will post more often but I fear it may be downhill from here on... :P BTW, I had a rush of blood to the head yesterday and finally ordered myself a 70-200VR along with a D200! I'm very excited and the 70-200VR should arrive on Monday with the D200 to follow in a couple of weeks (hopefully before I head off to NZ... The D70 is going to my sister).

You can expect plenty of samples once the gear arrives!

Cheers,

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Postby MATT on Sat Jan 21, 2006 7:58 am

Gret Roo pic, Almost looks like that through the scope!!!

Did you find your 70-200 for a reasonable price??


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Postby marcotrov on Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:44 am

Terrific 'any post' stephen :) This shot is a beautifully taken behavioural of a much photographed and much loved icon (if your not a grain farmer :lol: ) The 3 key features that make it a great image (as others have mentioned) are its tack sharpness, perfect differential focussing and the composition/attitude of the subject. :wink:
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Postby Hybrid on Sat Jan 21, 2006 11:18 am

MATT wrote:Gret Roo pic, Almost looks like that through the scope!!!

Did you find your 70-200 for a reasonable price??


Thanks MATT, the price I got for the 70-200VR was $2845 (Aus stock), which will end up being $2586 after I get the GST back on TRS. Certainly not as good a price as others got theirs for here - I was all set to buy the lens grey from our friend Mr. Birddog but there are just none available, and haven't been for quite some time. In the end, I figured the price was close enough after the TRS and it would be crazy to miss this opportunity to take it to NZ. You only live once :)

marcotrov - thanks for your eloquent review!

Cheers,

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