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 by camrak on Thu May 25, 2006 5:25 pm
I would like to invite everybody for this small photo presentation:
 http://www.foto.melbourne.pl/cbd1/slideshownew.php
I made this presentation for polish community in Melbourne also in Poland. Sometimes people from my old country ask me about this city - Melbourne.
This is my answer 
One suggestion - for comfort ADSL or cable connections is necessary 
Do you like it ? Any comments welcome 
Upsss - I will be forgot, this is our polish nonprofit website (I made this site with my friends) about Melbourne, but still only in polish language. http://www.melbourne.pl Cheers! Last edited by camrak on Thu May 25, 2006 6:18 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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by NikonUser on Thu May 25, 2006 5:29 pm
That's awesome!!
The site looks really good!! Works really well and you have some great shots on there.
No negatives or nits from me!
Paul
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by Geoff on Thu May 25, 2006 5:31 pm
Camrak - some beautiful images in there indeed.
Not a huge fan of flash as it simply doesn't work for those without a broadband connection. As you stated you definately need that kind of connection to make this work. It's stylish and simple. The music selection is great, where did u find that? Nice work!
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by Geoff on Thu May 25, 2006 5:33 pm
NikonUser wrote:That's awesome!!
No negatives
Paul
Err Paul - this is digital format, of course there's no negatives 
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by NikonUser on Thu May 25, 2006 5:37 pm
Geoff wrote:NikonUser wrote:That's awesome!!
No negatives
Paul
Err Paul - this is digital format, of course there's no negatives
Oooh. That's why I can't find a place to put the film into my D2X!!!  
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by BBJ on Thu May 25, 2006 5:54 pm
Camrak. I liked it very much and job well done and i too liked the music and i am sure all who look at it will like it as well.
Cheers
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by Silvershaft on Thu May 25, 2006 6:00 pm
Excellent job I must say
There were some absolutely brilliant shots there. Were they all taken by yourself or handfull of people?
Love to have that many shots worth sharing!
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by Yi-P on Thu May 25, 2006 6:29 pm
I really love the stadium shots there... excellent ones
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by rokkstar on Thu May 25, 2006 6:46 pm
Incredible use of flash. I like the anchor points on the right click menu, very clever.
Also the bottom menu is very cool.
Really impressed with both your flash programming and your photography.
Matt
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by PiroStitch on Thu May 25, 2006 6:53 pm
I must be the only one struggling with the Flash menu down the bottom. No I'm not comp illiterate or the minority that can't navigate a Flash site, but the way the scroll automatically jumps from left to right makes my cursor click on every alternate image instead of letting me go to the next image.
Also the pre-loader bar for each image tends to jump around for each pic. Don't know if this was your intention.
Having said that, the pics are tops
Btw, I'm using Firefox...the one and only browser
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by stubbsy on Thu May 25, 2006 6:57 pm
Camrak
Cool use of flash and some great pics, although I must say it's bloody long (I didn't get all the way through to image #178). Music works nicely too.
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by camrak on Thu May 25, 2006 8:36 pm
Thank for very nice comments.
Silvershaft I took these photos myself and I know this is loooong presentation, but I wos sitting for two days before monitor and deleted many photos for up to this magical number -178
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by camrak on Fri May 26, 2006 5:23 pm
PiroStitch sorry - I mist your comments 
In the Internet Explorer all is ok, but I'm check this on the Firefox v1.0.7 and I see only one different - image number description sometimes is on the top of picture sometimes beside of pictrure. Which version Firefox you use to see this slideshow? Or maybe you have trouble with flash plugin in mozilla?
Somebody have tis same problem like PiroStitch with Mozilla Firefox ?
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by gstark on Fri May 26, 2006 5:45 pm
Camrak,
I don't like Flash - especially for gallery work such as this - it's simply the wrong tool IMHO - and the menu system is overly complex and way too sensitive, making it difficult to use and navigate through the images.
That said, the images are great, and your choice of music is good too - inoffensive, without being bland or muzak.
Well done.
You might wish to consider putting up an alternate site without the flash, for those who prefer to not use it. Singapore or Gallery2 might be a suitable tool for this.
Oh yes, I'm using FF, and it looks ok to me.
g.
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by camrak on Fri May 26, 2006 5:54 pm
gstark thanks for warm words about my photos, my intention was not make a gallery but only slideshow
I also think this is wrong solution for gallery (slideshow) but if you wont you can see my real flash gallery here: http://www.yourphotography.com.au/index.php ... still under construction
I also use gallery 2 and Coppermine Photo Gallery - this last is my favourite CMS gallery.
Enjoy
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